Sunday, 14 June 2020

my new zealand creature

my animal is a sea lion i like it because it is my favourite animal i like because it has a baby and a dad and a family. My animal is the best because it has a sharp teeth and a tail and it can bite people and they take a one whole bite of a people i like it because they look like a lion but they have a baby cousin.


  1. hi alekisio l like your story it is really good and perfect wow make sure,
    you always do full stops at the end of your writing great job alekisio ,

  2. Hi alekisio,
    I like your story but cant you do better?.That is a great story though.Make sure you keep that up.