Alekisio-E Asttle Recount Writing Term 1
Friday 12 March Whananu and Family time Introduction/planning
Who- My family and I went swimming at the beach and we ate dinner snacks there and we had so much fun at the beach.
What- i slipped in the beach and the big waves came and pushed us far and i pushed Laurence, and iverson in the big waves at the beach.
Where- at the hot water nice beach.
When on the holidays january 29.
Why- Because the weather was so hot and sunny that's why we went there.
How- we drove there with a car and we came back to our house when we finished swimming at the nice cool water salty beach.
During my holidays me and my brother were playing fortnite and we had two controllers and we played split screen and we had so much fun playing fortnite. My uncle and my aunty were playing with us and we enjoyed playing fortnite and we were having snacks to eat and it was on sunny holidays and we went to Glen innes to play rugby and touch on the big field. After when we came back from Glen Innes we ate chicken nibbles and we had Fanta and Mountain dew to drink. We had lots of food to eat and we had Chips and Candy at night time and we were sleeping. We had fun and I had a dream we were good on the fortnite. After sleeping we went to church and when we came back we had to go up stairs because they were having a prayer and when they left we went downstairs and ate food in the kitchen like noodles and weetbix. After weetbix we went upstairs and played on my brother netbook and we played g-switch and we were eating our chips for school and we had so much fun in my house. After we went upstairs my nenas friend ofa sosefo and her son came to my house and play around and we had fun with him and we ate lollies and my brother laurence were playing kicks outside and we all most hit my nenas friends son on the head and we said sorry to him we were looking after him and my uncles and aunty we clean up the whole house upstairs and downstairs.
I felt very good and I also felt terrible because it was raining hard outside so I can't play outside anymore.
I heard a bird tweeting and I smelt food downstairs and i tates a chicken and a fish and I touched a person and a rugby ball. I gave it a 5
hello sio it is me vili,love your work
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